presentation comments

Write comments for two presentations.Each comment half page.Do not judge the presentation!!!!! Just be kind and frinedly.The first one: https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/e/2PACX-1vRKq3tULJgDGe0vHWR0f5rgkL59Znj2nPfy2dDpYXCGFKu6TPaQfJVkY9gj4dHb921S9rcW02NKx1Kh/pub?start=false&loop=false&delayms=6000000The …